Bài văn mẫu IELTS writing task 1-band 7+

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay: The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of British adults in five age categories who made financial donations to charity in 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that more older people in Britain gave their money to charity than younger ones. In addition, the figure for donors aged 36-50 was the highest in 1990.
In the year 1990, the percentage of the oldest donating money in Britain accounted for approximately 32% while only 17% of adults in the youngest age group gave money to charity. Twenty years later, the figure for donors aged over 65 rose slightly by 3%. By contrast, the 18-25 age group saw a significant drop of 10%.
Looking at the other age groups, we can see that the proportion of 51-to 65-year-old people giving money to charity rose from 35% in 1990 to nearly 40% in 2010. On the other hand, the figures for the 26-35 and 36-50 age groups fell from 31% to 24% and from 42% to 35%, respectively over the period of 20 years.

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