The charts below show Australian people in different age groups who used the internet for three reasons.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bar chart: Exercise 3
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Exercise 3: bar chart
The charts illustrates Australian people in different age groups using the internet for three reasons namely social networking, emailing, and paying bills online or online banking.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of Australian people using the internet for emailing. Furthermore, the young mainly use the internet to access social networking and emailing, but the elderly people only use the internet for emailing.
The proportion of people in all age groups who used the internet for emailing accounted for 100% while the figures for social networking, and paying bills online or online banking are much lower, at 60%, and 65% respectively. 98% of young people using the internet to access social networking whereas the figure for elderly people made up only 20%.
Looking at the third chart in detail, we can see that the percentages of four age groups including 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 using the internet for paying bills online or online banking are relatively equal (60% each). Finally, the figure for six age groups using the internet for emailing are relatively comparable, at around 80%.
Hi em!
Phần mở bài em dùng người lớn tuổi mình có 4 cách: the old, the elderly, old people, hoặc elderly people. Em ko được dùng the elderly people nhé.
Ở đoạn body 1: em cho 98% of young people là chủ ngữ, thì quá khứ đơn, cấu trúc một nên động từ chính use sẽ biến thành used:
Câu đúng là: 98% of young people used the internet to access social networking…
Câu cuối của body 2: mỗi cái là 80% nên em thêm each vào sau 80%.
at around 80% each.
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Exercise 3: bar chart
The charts illustrates Australian people in different age groups using the internet for three reasons namely social networking, emailing, and paying bills online or online banking.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of Australian people using the internet for emailing. Furthermore, the young mainly use the internet to access social networking and emailing, but the elderly only use the internet for emailing.
The proportion of people in all age groups who used the internet for emailing accounted for 100% while the figures for social networking, and paying bills online or online banking are much lower, at 60%, and 65% respectively. 98% of young people used the internet to access social networking whereas the figure for elderly people made up only 20%.
Looking at the third chart in detail, we can see that the percentages of four age groups including 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 using the internet for paying bills online or online banking are relatively equal (60% each). Finally, the figure for six age groups using the internet for emailing are relatively comparable, at around 80% each.
Sắp tới em quá trình luyện thi IELTS 1 kèm 1 với cô kkkk. Cảm ơn em nhé😁😁😁
Chỗ mở bài động từ “illustrate” em xoá s nhé vì thì hiện tại đơn, cấu trúc một, câu khẳng định thì chủ ngữ số nhiều đếm được “the bar charts” thì động từ chính giữ nguyên nhé em.